Comments on: ONLY THE NECK DOWN by David Reagan http://futurismic.com/2006/07/01/only-the-neck-down-by-david-reagan/ Presenting the fact and fiction of tomorrow since 2001 Sat, 19 May 2012 23:03:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: David Reagan http://futurismic.com/2006/07/01/only-the-neck-down-by-david-reagan/comment-page-1/#comment-311 David Reagan Wed, 13 Sep 2006 08:18:06 +0000 http://futurismic.com/2006/07/01/new-fiction-from-david-reagan/#comment-311 Apologies for my delay in answering -- I didn't realize anyone left a comment ;) To answer the first question, I saw the two men masturbating as a secondary way for Patrice to "rate" the women auditioning for her. FYI -- I tend to be more of an organic writer, so I don't tend to think too deeply about some of the side elements -- they tend to take care if themselves. For the latter questions, she sold the rights to her unique physical parameters, if you will, and while it is an important element to the story, I'm still glad I spent most of the piece peering into Adrianna's cranium. Thanks for taking a look! Apologies for my delay in answering — I didn’t realize anyone left a comment ;)

To answer the first question, I saw the two men masturbating as a secondary way for Patrice to “rate” the women auditioning for her.

FYI — I tend to be more of an organic writer, so I don’t tend to think too deeply about some of the side elements — they tend to take care if themselves.

For the latter questions, she sold the rights to her unique physical parameters, if you will, and while it is an important element to the story, I’m still glad I spent most of the piece peering into Adrianna’s cranium.

Thanks for taking a look!

]]> By: pcrh http://futurismic.com/2006/07/01/only-the-neck-down-by-david-reagan/comment-page-1/#comment-310 pcrh Wed, 02 Aug 2006 23:02:28 +0000 http://futurismic.com/2006/07/01/new-fiction-from-david-reagan/#comment-310 Nice vignette. A couple of questions: what were the two guys masturbating for? What was their purpose in that room? And what exactly did she sell? Her physical body, or just the right to make images of it? I assume it was the latter, but if so, you might want to go into the legal aspects a bit. Does the company now own copyright over her body or something? Could be interesting. Overall I liked it. Stayed in POV well, interesting details and main character. Nice vignette. A couple of questions: what were the two guys masturbating for? What was their purpose in that room?

And what exactly did she sell? Her physical body, or just the right to make images of it? I assume it was the latter, but if so, you might want to go into the legal aspects a bit. Does the company now own copyright over her body or something? Could be interesting. Overall I liked it. Stayed in POV well, interesting details and main character.

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