Comments on: Diebold: Two minutes to vote

By: Paul Raven

Paul Raven — Fri, 12 Sep 2008 00:08:56 +0000

I see you prefer to emphasise the horror over the sf…

Tom Marcinko — Thu, 11 Sep 2008 23:50:08 +0000

Not bad, but I think the first two words could go and you’d still have a pretty scary story.

Worse:

“R.I.P. McCain; Palin sworn in.”

Paul Raven — Thu, 11 Sep 2008 23:27:20 +0000

“You have till Oct. 15 to submit your 1,000-word Election Day horror story to Apex.”

In the spirit of Friday Flash Fiction, I’ll publish a four-word one here:

“Low turnout. McCain wins.”